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So sorry for the bloggy break last week, I was out on a "working" spring break, cleaning and painting the house we're moving into soon.
I wanted to comment today on a post I read over at the Books and Such blog: http://www.booksandsuch.biz/blog/choosing-the-perfect-client-unpublished-authors/. Wendy Lawton says that agents "are seeing too many manuscripts too early. One editor uses the term “workmanlike” to describe this. It’s all elbows. Every technique seems to jut out. The writing is self-conscious and overworked. The book that excites us is the product of a confident writer who has mastered the craft."
Now, this is a problem for the newbie author. We don't know what agents are looking for, so how can we be confident that we've mastered the craft?
If you continue to read Wendy's post, you'll see other things that get you picked up quickly from the slush pile, including a great platform and good personality. But that doesn't give us a clue as to how to get our manuscripts practically perfect.
Sally Apokedak also blogged about Wendy's quote, saying that it's the internal conflict that keeps her moving through a manuscript: http://www.novelrocket.com/2012/04/making-readers-turn-page.html. That diagonal movement makes you want to stick with the main character.
But for that first-time author, sitting there with an awesome manuscript on your hard drive just SCREAMING to be let out on queries, it's hard to know where to start.
I know I've given this advice before, but a great starting place is critique groups within your genre. I can't stress this enough. But sometimes we don't have time to get involved that way. So our options become narrower.
Finding a beta reader can also give you direction. But beta readers who have the time to read through your whole novel, commenting as they go, are very hard to come by (unless they're related and feel an obligation...Stephenie Meyer's sister read through Twilight for her).
But really, in the current publishing climate, I'll give you the same advice a writer friend gave me (Evinda Lepins, this is for you!). You cannot put your unedited work out there. Even on your blog. It doesn't reflect your best work.
Of course, when I got this advice, I thought:
1) I don't have money to hire an editor, and
2) I've already posted thirteen unedited chapters of Otherworld on my blog.
But guess what? She was SO, so right. An editor knows the current writing trends. An editor can poke holes in your inconsistent timelines or tell you when your characters aren't acting...well, in character.
So I did. I hired an editor for the first 55 pages of my current MS. Was it a financial sacrifice? Yes! But was it worth it? Also, yes. I'd had a crit group give some excellent advice, but I needed more technical info on dialogue and formatting techniques.
Then, I got my big break when the agent who liked my book also happened to be an accomplished editor. (Yes, I count my blessings every day, Andy!). And he's an editor I enjoy working with--always challenging, but never too harsh.
So I'd definitely recommend saving up your pennies for an edit on your book, even an edit on that first chapter. I found my first editor through a Christian editing service online that pairs you with the editor of your choice: http://christianeditor.com/.
I figure that an edit is less expensive, or perhaps the same cost, as a writer's conference. And you're going to have to have your best work ready to take there, anyway!
I hope this helps get you from the slush to the rush of agent/publisher acceptance!
****How about you? What sorts of techniques have you used to get your manuscript in tip-top querying shape?****